I only just now re-read the entirety of "Losing You" days after you posted it. I feel bad. *hangs head* I found one thing in the last chapter, though.

"You need help, Victor," William added, shaking his head. "It's not healthy to cling to this fantasy for so long. Look what it's doing to poor Pastor Galswells. Man can barely get through a sermon without twitching. And what about Mrs. Cartwell, may she rest in peace? Your little 'adventure' didn't do her much good."

I think maybe you mean Carter since Cartwell is Emily's last name?

Ngl, I got a little teary when Victor was in the woods saying goodbye. Also I kind of want to punch his parents but that's nothing new, lol.

Looking forward to the "In the Land of the Dead" rewrite. :)