Oh God! Please don’t notice me please don’t notice me
Missing a punctuation there at the end.
Chapter Three:
“How long have you know about the engagement?”
"know" should be "known"
In fact, Victor was starting to get the sneaking suspicion Wonderland Park was somehow bigger on the inside than it was on the outside.
I giggled. :)
Okay, now that I've read what you have so far, I like it! Yeah, yeah, I know you knew I'd say that. I can't help it. You know how much I love crossovers and I love the little cameos (and I JUST watched How to Train Your Dragon recently and I liked Cloudy with a Chance of Meatballs so I smiled at those).
And you know if you Google "Why is a raven like a writing desk?" you get a bunch of answers, not just the one I gave you eons ago. ^^v
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Oh God! Please don’t notice me please don’t notice me
Missing a punctuation there at the end.
Chapter Three:
“How long have you know about the engagement?”
"know" should be "known"
In fact, Victor was starting to get the sneaking suspicion Wonderland Park was somehow bigger on the inside than it was on the outside.
I giggled. :)
Okay, now that I've read what you have so far, I like it! Yeah, yeah, I know you knew I'd say that. I can't help it. You know how much I love crossovers and I love the little cameos (and I JUST watched How to Train Your Dragon recently and I liked Cloudy with a Chance of Meatballs so I smiled at those).
And you know if you Google "Why is a raven like a writing desk?" you get a bunch of answers, not just the one I gave you eons ago. ^^v