I didn't see any typos my first go around. There were a couple of comma placements that looked weird to me but I think that was just my eyes and brain not getting it rather than an actual grammatical error so I'm not gonna mention them. For now. You know how my subsequent re-reads go lol.
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Date: 2021-05-15 11:45 pm (UTC)FERDY!!! <3<3<3
I didn't see any typos my first go around. There were a couple of comma placements that looked weird to me but I think that was just my eyes and brain not getting it rather than an actual grammatical error so I'm not gonna mention them. For now. You know how my subsequent re-reads go lol.
That was an enjoyable chapter. :D