Sorry! Didn't Mean To Miss An Update!

It's just -- I spent the day working on my ryansgulch app for forgotten_vows.

Which I just sent in.

*MADE OF NERVES*

So -- yeah.

Fanfiction Update Of An Unusual Sort

Today wasn't really anything special for the most part -- spent most of it fussing around online, wondering why tumblr wasn't loading and stuff like that. I did, however, end up rewriting Chapter 16 of "Finding You." Why Chapter 16? Because I had a reviewer recently who commented that Victor was acting too innocent and young overall, and she used the major scene of that -- Victor seeing Jack smacking around one of his prostitutes -- as a specific example. The thing really stuck with me, and so today I ended up going back into Chapter 16 and rewriting most of it.

Now, I really do think the new Chapter 16 is better -- and it actually has some new content, in the form of a new conversation between Alice and Victor that brings up something that I was going to bring up more fully in "Forgetting You," but then figured it would sound like an ass pull. So yay, delayed setting up stuff! Anyway, I hope you guys like it too: here it is. Next thing to get to is of course Chapter 3 of "Forgetting You."