*pokes "Temporalnauts" with a stick*

*wonders if she's poking a dead horse*
-VD2: ??? What's that supposed to mean?-
I'm wondering if I actually have a decent ending here. I really can't think of any other place to go with the story.
-HD: So you've come to the end? Then stop. No sense in trying to continue on -- you'll just loop around to the beginning again, and that helps no one.-
Well, I'm not quite sure. I need a second opinion.
*looks out at audience* Want to give me a hand? I know probably most of you know nothing ABOUT Psychonauts, but I could really use the fresh perspective.
-VD2: We need her to get things off her plate, everyone. Please help.-
-RPD: Here's the Psychonaut Playlist she uses for background purposes.-
You'll want Sasha's Shooting Gallery mainly. I'll explain the joke a bit with the story too, though:
( Temporalnauts 1.0 )

So, yeah, comments appreciated.
-VD: How's the other stuff coming?-
Pretty well -- I worked on the drabbles88 fic and "Comfortably Numb" this morning. Pretty sure the next prompt will be ready to be posted soon. Also got two and half pages on "There's Always Tomorrow" and two more pages on "Cinder-Marty."
-DW: That's good. Always nice to see you productive.-
I do my best.
-RPD: How about Sims?-
Knocked the Robinsons off the Twin Oaks Park catch-up list, and visited Emma in Eureka. Neither of them had particularly exiciting days -- Emma spent most of hers at work. She did hit a water main digging for treasure, though. :p Next time I play, I'm gonna try and move in Holden.
-OD: *curious* Before the wedding?-
Well, I was reading Etiquette Hell for a while, and I thought about how unfair it was that the bride only got to invite HER friends. . . .
-D: *raises eyebrow* They're not real people, Victoria.-
Still, it seemed only fair.
-RPD: You've never done it before, though.-
Well, most of my playables marry other playables -- they all have friends in common. Plus, moving in Holden may help her with her career and get her days off at a more convienent time. I don't want to have to wait around for a vacation day to get her married, or have to deal with an angry phone message.
-TD: You really do have a lot of affection for those things, don't you?-
You get that way.
-TTV: So why on earth do you want to do an asylum challenge?-
Variety! The story would be that you're not crazy at all (well, Fred is, but we'll figure something out) and that Doc is working to save all of you. Once he wins the challenge, you all move out into your satellite familes and have happy fun times.
-HD: Marriage and babies and all that?-
Yup.
-TTV: Hang on, I thought you were making Emily and Victoria for me.-
Yeah. So?
-TTV: . . . .-
-RPD: She wouldn't be able to do it, Victor. Sims get jealous very easily.-
Someone forget I'm a custom content whore?