Aug. 21st, 2012

crossover_chick: Doc in goggles and holding a big old plug with the words "feeling sparky..." (BTTF: feeling sparky/creative)
Chapter 4 -- I altered the description of the Wonderland Park Vale of Tears a little (and fixed a typo while I was there). Reason?

I'm RPing Butterfly Boy showing his new friend Alice around the park, and they recently came to the Vale of Tears. I wrote up a description, then went, "Oh, wait, I'd better check this against the description in the actual story."

Turns out I liked the description I'd written up for RP better than the one in "Secundus." XD In my defense, when I wrote that chapter, I was basing the Vale on the version we saw in the original Alice, and it was a pretty dull and gloomy place in that. Now that we've got A:MR Vale, I wanted to make it prettier.

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