"Secundus" Has Been Edited Slightly
Aug. 21st, 2012 11:54 pm![[personal profile]](https://www.dreamwidth.org/img/silk/identity/user.png){kind=small}
crossover_chickChapter 4 -- I altered the description of the Wonderland Park Vale of Tears a little (and fixed a typo while I was there). Reason?
I'm RPing Butterfly Boy showing his new friend Alice around the park, and they recently came to the Vale of Tears. I wrote up a description, then went, "Oh, wait, I'd better check this against the description in the actual story."
Turns out I liked the description I'd written up for RP better than the one in "Secundus." XD In my defense, when I wrote that chapter, I was basing the Vale on the version we saw in the original Alice, and it was a pretty dull and gloomy place in that. Now that we've got A:MR Vale, I wanted to make it prettier.
I'm RPing Butterfly Boy showing his new friend Alice around the park, and they recently came to the Vale of Tears. I wrote up a description, then went, "Oh, wait, I'd better check this against the description in the actual story."
Turns out I liked the description I'd written up for RP better than the one in "Secundus." XD In my defense, when I wrote that chapter, I was basing the Vale on the version we saw in the original Alice, and it was a pretty dull and gloomy place in that. Now that we've got A:MR Vale, I wanted to make it prettier.
